I never knew that half of the U.S. lived in unsafe breathing conditions. That's seriously depressing!
Your summaries are very concise and well written, you don't stray from the topics at all. I'm not sure if the question asked wanted you to write transitions between the three subjects, but that seems like it may be good practice for future papers.
A sunburn in your lungs? Ouch! This is very well organized and informative. You have great examples and evidence for all 3 topics! Great writing, scary story. Yikes!
I never knew that half of the U.S. lived in unsafe breathing conditions. That's seriously depressing!
ReplyDeleteYour summaries are very concise and well written, you don't stray from the topics at all. I'm not sure if the question asked wanted you to write transitions between the three subjects, but that seems like it may be good practice for future papers.
Informitive...and terrifying! :( :P :)
A sunburn in your lungs? Ouch! This is very well organized and informative. You have great examples and evidence for all 3 topics! Great writing, scary story. Yikes!
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