Sorry for the unoriginal title guys, I'm just not feeling it right now. It's surprisingly difficult to think those up and apparently works better when I'm tired. But here is this weekend's close reading assignment.
Good work many good points. I would however work on expanding on your point a little more because it seems like the majority of your paragraphs are quotes that could maybe use a little more explanantion? Other than that great work and very insightful points
Great ideas in this close read! you really used great examples that supported your thesis. One thing I would suggest is maybe try to write it in essay format, with introduction and conclusion paragraphs. It would just probably be great practice for the exam, Great work Grace!
Good work many good points. I would however work on expanding on your point a little more because it seems like the majority of your paragraphs are quotes that could maybe use a little more explanantion? Other than that great work and very insightful points
ReplyDeleteGreat ideas in this close read! you really used great examples that supported your thesis. One thing I would suggest is maybe try to write it in essay format, with introduction and conclusion paragraphs. It would just probably be great practice for the exam, Great work Grace!
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