I've always wanted to read 1984 but have yet to find the time. Good essay, good points, i think that they could be backed up a little bit better with a little bit of more evidence especially in the second body paragraph which doesn't really have much meat but other then that its an overall great essay!
Great essay Grace! I have read 1984 and loved it, and your points really support your thesis and are very strong. I also love the last paragraph of your essay, it concluded well and made the reader think about the future and out society. Nice work!
I've always wanted to read 1984 but have yet to find the time. Good essay, good points, i think that they could be backed up a little bit better with a little bit of more evidence especially in the second body paragraph which doesn't really have much meat but other then that its an overall great essay!
ReplyDeleteGreat essay Grace! I have read 1984 and loved it, and your points really support your thesis and are very strong. I also love the last paragraph of your essay, it concluded well and made the reader think about the future and out society. Nice work!
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